【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
& ?/ w" _0 U+ j; T3 F+ YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 l+ T2 Y+ y4 V2 H; vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! F+ o; z( d9 |( jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ x3 ?4 p$ h3 \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- ]# m! x7 J% l" k& d! C7 QYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ P$ f* l1 E' h+ BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# h: }8 ], x2 _4 uNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% b$ g3 w7 R/ |( [3 N2 f# Z+ kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ \$ C& n' u6 {$ X# Y, RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% `8 o) q9 x4 SI regret not dying
& T! ^- T8 F  T0 @0 fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ m7 D* ]% n1 K1 q# A* W8 wWith such a tongue as yours,
( Q: G" |* t3 r9 s7 a/ i0 nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 a. n- D+ V) m2 Z. mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ X; x9 X. D2 `) CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 S" y1 w6 F" m) j! H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ F, ?0 r2 I6 C# u8 p3 b/ E/ W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) m0 B1 B7 S7 Q/ }% k; ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& c& C: Q4 j# o. m( X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 K  k: D, f5 E) K* e, P) ^: E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 g* n7 q- _7 C6 i3 B6 q4 A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: j9 }# q8 a- l/ g$ }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& l$ O0 o$ H6 P! A) u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 Q- ?1 y. s1 H( X/ k$ V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# B4 G4 q8 ^) l! f7 g' P8 A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 k: L; B& k4 L. j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 `. M4 v: n7 z: ~1 T& [9 G' z1 @5 C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% e% |8 A  K! K7 y/ t5 m- x1 n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 r6 F4 v0 i5 B& v" C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: Z) @! O8 j7 k4 a% J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# A# C0 ]5 I0 {& @% V. W3 J* @3 j9 m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ O$ f6 m; ?" W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& L# d, m# x& g3 J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 b9 K6 @) H/ O2 G' P" p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! k, ?; t. L& Q8 L& F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( v! I! L: {- s6 k7 q# M% c  `<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

7 Q1 W  U8 T# s* Q1 @: e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>